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Should the governmet pay for the elderly.?
The elderly are an important part of the society. They have spent their whole lives trying to make our lives better. Their effort is present in every aspect of the present. No long time ago, they were adults, working as hard as we do right now, contributing to the economic development and moreover, being an active part in their families.
Despite this, when they get old, most of them end up living in a home with other old people which has nurses taking care of them. Generally, this occurs because everybody in the family is working, studying or living far away, so they have to move there to avoid being alone in their homes. Sadly, since not all of these "nursing homes" are supported by the government, the families have to spend a lot of money to get these services. If they are not able to afford end of life care, sometimes they must stay at home alone which could lead them to depression, or worse, harm.
For these reason, the government should create a system to assist the families that do not have the money to pay for nursing homes. Research should be done to better understad the fiscal situation of the family, and set the correct amount of money such that they receive help if necessary.
Furthermore, these kind of centers should be controlled by the government. The government should guarantee the food, care, medicines, nurses and everything necesssary to give them the best quality of life quality possible. As it is well know, most countries do no pay any attention to this issue, it can be ignored for other kinds of problems. Because of this widespread ignorance and avoidance, the families should make a plan, strategy or campaign to formally ask to the government to assist them.
As a conclution, it is important to keep in mind that sooner or later we are going be the elderly, so we should do our best to guaranteed that all of us spend the last years of our lives in a comfortable, peaceful and agreeable place.
Should the governmet pay for the elderly.?
The elderly is are an important part of the society. They have spent their whole life trying to make our lives better. Their effort is present evident in every aspect that we are able to see in the present days of daily life (implies present, anyway). Not long time ago, they were adults, working as hard as we do right now, being an important part of the economic developing and moreover, and being an active part in their families. Not long ago, they were adults working hard, like our generation, to contribute to the economy and the wellbeing of their families. (I hope I didnt change the meaning of your sentence, it was slightly vague. It would vary depending on if you mean this on a local, or more global sense.
Despite of this, when they get old, most of them end up living in a home with other old people which has with nurses taking care of them. Generally, this occurs because everybody in the family is working, studying, or living far away, so they have to move there to avoid being alone in the home. Sadly, since not all of these kind of "care centers" are supported by the government, the families have to spend a lot of money to get these services. Whether If they are not able to afford it, sometimes they are obligated to must leave them alone in the home, so they are by themselves, and it could possibly leading them to depression, or worse, to get harm/injury. (may want to say-- exposing them to the risks of depression or physical harm)
For these this reason, the government should create a system to assist the families that do not have the money to pay for this care. A Research should be done to know if the family are is able to afford it or not, and work it out to set the correct amount of money that they should receive as a help.
Furthermore, these kinds of centers should be controlled by the government. They should guaranteed the food, care, medicines, nurses and everything to give them the better best life quality of life as possible. As we know, most countries do not pay any much attention to this issue, that is why, like many other issues, it can be put down for other kind of problems that is why the families should must/should make a plan, strategy or campaing campaign to formally ask to the government to assist them.
As a conclution, it is important to keep in mind that later than early (good, you know the construct of this saying!) sooner than later we are going will be the elderly (or you can can-- sooner than later we will be in their place, <colloquially-- 'in their shoes'), so we should make sure that we are doing our best effort to guaranteed that we can spend the last years of our lives in a comfortable, peaceful and agreeable place.
Awesome work! If you have questions on my changes let me know. A couple grammatical issues, but mostly, they are made in more in an academic sense, to 'say more' with the same number of words. Hope you dont mind. Good job expressing yourself, on a political piece :)
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