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Hello everybody, that's this is my first time on this site; when it was suggested to me I liked the concept of gathering people as they can exchange their languages and I found my practical English needs support as my English - due to the fact my career is focused on technical expressions. so I wish it would hope this site will be helpful and wish I find support, too.

Very good for a first attempt! I'll explain my corrections below.

-The words "that's" means "that is" and makes no sense where you've used it.

-You should use a semi colon because you are writing something that isn't closely enough related to use a colon ":" or a hyphen "-", but something that is too raelated to what has been stated in the previous clause to warrent a full stop (or "period" as the Americans call them) "."

-You've incorrecltly used the infinitive "to wish" incorrectly. I've changed your sentence and taken it out because you don't really "wish" for things that are probably going to happen. It's more common to say "I wish that one day I can stand on Mars"

-When you write "too" at the end of a sentence it needs a comma before it.

Hope this helps and study hard! If you don't understand anything then contact me. :)

my first ;)

Hello everybody,. that'This is my first time on this site.  Wwhen it was suggested to me I liked the concept of gathering people gathering as they can exchange their languages. and I found find my practical English needs supported as my English, due to my career, is focused on technical expressions. so I wish hope it would will be helpful and wish hope I find support too.

Sorry! I've made a mistake! You also need to take this bit out.

when it was suggested to me I liked the concept of gathering people as they can exchange their languages and I found my practical English needs support as my English - due to the fact my career is focused on technical expressions.