Sleep
I'd like to tell you about sleep.
It was little house in old village. I walked with my dog around.
Suddenly I heard scream and a loud knock. Then my grandmother hid me at dark raw cellar.
It was very fearfully! I saw a man at a little slot. He was 30-35. He had a black hair and dark empty ears. Man hold a gun in his hand. Murderer killed my family and all friends, all people which I known. And I kept in mind only his conceited smile.
Then I ran and ran as long as I can. When I hadn't a some power I stay at park at town. I thought that he didn't catch up.
But then HE came around the bend. Man with dark eays told me somethink but I didn't heard him. His smile was amfull.
In the second he pointed a gun at me. And I died.
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A Nightmare
I'd like to tell you about a bad dream I just had.
I lived in a little house in an old village. I was walking around with my dog.
Suddenly, I heard a scream and a loud bang. Then my grandmother hid me in our cellar.
I was very scared! I saw a man through a little slot. He was 30-35. He had black hair and dark, empty eyes. The man was holding a gun in his hand. He killed my family and all my friends. All the people that I knew. And I kept his smirk in my mind. Then I ran and ran as long as I could. I stopped at a park to catch my breath. I thought he wouldn't catch up with me. But then HE came around the bend. The man with dark eyes told me something, but I didn't hear him. His grin was harmful. Then he pointed his gun at me. And I died. :(
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"awful" - my mistake
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what the mean of amfull???
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