Random writing :)

Today weather was so bad here. It made me so tired. Just came back home asluggishly and I received a message my friend sent me. I was so suprised and couldn't believe my eyes./! because It was rather long and I was smiling while I read it, and so didn't feel tired anymore. He is Greek. but Right now, he is studying for his undergraduate degree in the UK. I think he is an outgoing person and can make other people feel comfortable when they talk to him. He told me many things about Greece. Greece is a paradise that I must visit someday. and He also told me something special about UK too. I also introduced him to something about Vietnam to him that could make him be attracted interested, surprised, or even a little bit scaryed.  It's interesting to see how different cultures are. :)

Notes: Only use "and" once per sentence. (There's some exceptions, but you shouldn't use it more than twice in formal writing. If speaking, it's ok. Break it into smaller sentences.)

Use ! to express surprise or add emphasis.

Use other connectors. And = building on information. (The cat was big AND white.) So = explanation. (The cat was white SO I could see it.)

Use "interested" instead of "attracted" in this case. It sounds more natural.

I don't know how to explain why you need to use "scared" instead of "scary", but you have to in this sentence. 

Great job! Keep up the good work! :D :D :D