My life

My name is Lizeth, but my friends tell me "Liz." I´m from Colombia, am 23 years old, and I live with my parents and my older two brothers. We have always lived together and we´re a very close family. They are my greatest treasure in the world.

I finished my university studies 1 year ago, and I have been working as industrial engineer since then. I love my career and my work.

In my free time I like dancing, playing volleyball, and swimming. I hate cooking though...

Presently, I would like to learn English because my dream is to receive my masters. In my post-graduate I need to speak and write English. Another reason is because I would like to travel to the United States or London someday.

Thanks... I hope you can help me correct my mistakes.

See you soon,

bye bye

Very well done. I know it looks like a lot, but these were all very superficial corrections. Just remember that in English the names of countries and languages are capitalized. French, not french. Canada, not canada.

I make this mistake all of the time while learning French, I capitalize everything! Good luck with your masters!