Changes in the family stucture

Twenty yeas ago, the typical family was large/larger wide. Families had many children and they had a lot of aunts, uncles and cousins, but children often din't know their granparents because people died very young.
However, today the family is changing shape.
People usually live longer so children will know their great-gandpaents, and even their great-geat-grandparents.
Very few children don't have brothers o sisters Some children have very few brothers and sisters (siblings) and it is commont to be an only child. For that reason future generations will not have (many) cousins.

Today, parents are older than they were several years ago because many women go to univesity and after they have to find a job so they have their children after 35.
More couples divorce and children spend some time with their mother and then with their father. Also, parents get re-maried, so many children have a stepmother or stepfather and half-bothers or half-sisters.

On the other hand, Further many families have lost their home for the crisis, so they have had to move to their grandparents' home with children creating a very strefull environment for that problem. Also many parents have lost their jobs so their children don't have enought food to survive and they have to eat from ONG.
Also it is possible that, for the first time in my country, young people will have a lower standard of living than their parents had.

In conclusion, I think that family are changing very fast but every changes are not all changes are for the good.

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Changes in Family Stucture.

Twenty yeas ago, the typical family was large. Families had many children, and children had a lot of aunts, uncles and cousins. Children often didn't know their granparents however because people died very young.

Today the family unit is changing shape, people usually live longer so children know their great-gandparents or even their great-geat-grandparents. Very few children don't have brothers or sisters and it is common to be an only child, for that reason children in future generations might not have cousins.

Today, parents are older than they were several years ago.  More women go to univesity and then after that they have to find a job so they have children after 35. More couples get divorced, and children spend some time with their mother and also some time with their father. Parents sometimes get re-maried, so many children have a stepmother or stepfather and half-bothers or half-sisters.

On the other hand, many other families have lost their home due to a crisis, so they have to move to the grandparents' home and children are very stressed because of that problem. Many parents have lost their jobs so their children don't have enought food to survive and they have to eat from ONG (what is ONG?), it is posible that, the first time in my country, young people will have a lower standard of living than that of their parents.

In conclusion, I think that family is changing very fast but not all the changes are not good.

This is an interesting piece! Be careful on agreeing articles (the, a, an) with nouns, and check whether nouns are countable or uncountable (family is uncountable: family is, not family are).

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Amy

Changes in the family stucture

Twenty yeas years ago, the typical family was widelarge. Families had many children and they had a lot of aunts, uncles and cousins, but children often din't did not know their granparents because people died very young.
However, today the family structure is changing. shape.
People usually live longer, thus so children will know their great-gandpaents, even their great-geat-grandparents.
Very few children don't have brothers o or sisters and it is commont common to be an only child. for For that reason, future generations will not have cousins.

Today, parents are older than they were several years ago because many women go to univesity and after they have to find a job so they have their children after 35.(Doesn´t flow very well, maybe reword)

Because it is commonplace for many women to attend university, they are having children later in life. Women in the job market  spend more time focused on their careers, and less time at home with children. Because of this, the average age of parents has increased over time. 

More couples divorce and children spend some time with their mother and after with their father separately. Also, parents get re-maried, so many children have a stepmother or stepfather and half-bothers or half-sisters.

On the other hand, many families have lost their home for due to the crisis, so they have had to move to grandparents' home. This familial upheaval causes stress in and children are very strefull for that problem. Also many parents have lost their job jobs so their children don't do not(avoid contractions in writing) have enought enough food to survive and they have to eat from ONG.
Also it is posible possible that, the first time in my country, young people will have a lower standar standard of living than their parents have.

In conclusion, I think that family  families are changing very fast, but not every changes change are is not good.