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Change on the style of live. The world is permanently changing and for that reason the style of human life has changed in all these years. Which is the best form? First, If you ask to older people, they will probably say before for many reasons: before, the air was fresh, the rivers were clean, foods didn't have so many chemical products as now or the world was quieter than now. Maybe, they are right. On the other hand, technology has changed the style of life in the world. Technology has improved communication, medicine or information, for example. Now, you can be in touch with your people wherever they live. If you have an emergency you can always be located. Medicine has increased the life expectancy. For example, If you had problems with your heart you died being young. Now, it exits many types of organ transplantation and many vaccines that improve your health. Besides, you can be informed easily about what happened in the world. To sum up, I didn't live in the past but I think that older people have part of reason about they say but in this moment, the world is better than in the past. We are more health, more information and more communication than years ago.

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Changing lifestyles.

The world is permanently always changing and for that reason lifestyle changes through the years. Which is the best form?

dice "lifestyle" .  Style of life is grammatically correct but we just do not say it that way

First, If you ask to older people, they will probably say that life was better years ago for many reasons: before, the air was fresh, the rivers were clean, foods didn't have so many chemical products as now or the world was quieter than now. Maybe, they are right.

On the other hand, technology has changed the lifestyle of many in the world. Technology has improved communication, there is better medicine or information, for example. Now, you can be in touch with your people wherever they live. If you have an emergency you can always be located. Medicine has increased the life expectancy. For example, If you had problems with your heart you died young. Now, there exist many types of organ transplantation and many vaccines that improve your health. Now, you can be informed easily about what happened in the world.

To sum up, I didn't live in the past but I think that older people have some good reasons to prefer life in the past but at this moment, the world is better than in the past. We can enjoy better health, and have access to more information and more communication than years ago.

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Changes in the way of life.

The world is permanently changing and for that reason our way of life has changed over the years. But which is better, life then or now? 
 

If you ask older people, they will probably say life before for many reasons: before when the air was fresh, the rivers were clean, foods didn't have so many chemical products as now, and the world was quieter. Maybe, they are right.

On the other hand, technology has changed the way the world lives. Technology has improved communication, medicine, and how we exchange information, for example. Now, you can be in touch with people wherever they live. If you have an emergency, you can always be located. Medicine has increased life expectancy. For example, if you had problems with your heart, you died young. Now, many types of organ transplantation are possible and many vaccines are available that improve your health. In addition to this, you can be informed easily about what has happened in the world.

To sum up, I didn't live in the past but I think that older people are partly right in what they say but at this moment, the world is better than in the past. We are healthier, better informed, and more able to communicate than years ago.

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