I'd be appreciated if you correct it for me.
I use English alphabets J and D as starting point because these two alphabets have really deep meaning to me. J represents me and D represents family.
Nowadays, our society advocates recycling so I use triangle as the simplest starting point in geometric figure, to make the result of paper folding then it could be integrated, to achieve on decrease wasting resource. We can make coin purse by folding paper. To achieve waste reduction by ‘reusing’.
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I'd be appreciated appreciate it if you can correct it for me.
I use English alphabets J and D as starting point because these two alphabets have really deep meaning to me. J represents me and D represents my family.
Nowadays, our society advocates recycling so I use triangle as the simplest starting point in geometric figure, to make the result of paper folding then it could be integrated, to achieve on decrease wasting resource.(I didn't understand what you wanted to say by this) We can make coin purse by folding paper. To achieve waste reduction by ‘reusing’ 'recycling'.
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