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most popular sport About most popular sport Today I read an article about most popular sport and understand from that passage that football is the most popular sport, I didn’t know before 3.5 billion players and spectators love football and enjoy that. Cricket is the next one, about 3 billion people play and watch it. I think before cricket’s originally is India but the true answer is Australia.40 present of Indian population watch the cricket’s important games. After these field golf is most popular, it was amazing for me in 4000 years ago in Egypt used to play field golf, of curse with their unique rules which different from today’s rules. Tennis is the next, it shocked me the biggest tennis game lasted eleven hour and five minute!!! Awesome. And final game is ping pong or table tennis, I didn’t know ping pong ball can go over 160 kph. Before I read this article I taught basketball be in these five popular sport but I made mistake. Maybe cause I love basketball and play it, I think like that. tell me your opinion and correct me if make mistakes

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The Five Most Popular Sports


Today I read an article about the world's most popular sports.  The article gave the top spot to football, or, as it is known in some countries, soccer.  I learned that 3.5 billion players and spectators love this game.
   Cricket was the next most popular, with about 3 billion people playing and watching.  I had thought that the country where it was most popular was India, but the article said it was actually Australia. Nevertheless, 40 percent of the Indian population watches cricket’s most important games.
   After these sports, field golf is the most popular.  It was amazing for me to read that 4000 years ago, in Egypt, people played golf.  Of course, the rules were different then.
   Tennis came next on the list.  It shocked me to learn that the longest official tennis game lasted eleven hours and five minutes!  Awesome.
   The final sport in the top five was ping pong, or table tennis.  I didn’t know that a ping pong ball can go over 160 km/h, or 100 mph, in a game.
Before I read this article I thought basketball would be on the list, but I was wrong.  Maybe I thought so because I love basketball, and play it.

Tell me your opinion and correct me if I made any mistakes.

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