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A pen and a notebook two A pen and a notebook two a note is brand-new and written nothing in it. So am a pen. after ten days, they are talking to each other: Note angrily says: I am suffering from you, you thin idiot are always scribbling incorrectly on me. Why don' t you write correctly, why are you always making a lot of mistakes in a sentence? Pen in return: oh man, don't judge me, you are wrong, I am not a one doing all these things as you told. But I am the poor one who only follows the lord (me). He makes all these mistakes, writes all incorrect sentences, and makes you suffer. Note: I was wrong with you, I am so sorry. Pen: All right, He is using the www.lang-8.com now, so I hope that generous people on the lang-8 will help him to achieve his goal to be a good writer in English. Note: ok, So do I. Both: thank you users of the lang-8 for correcting, will correct, and will be correcting my lord's entries. Thus, He will be a good writer in English soon, and We both will be happy. thank you again.

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A pen and a notebook two

A pen and a notebook two

a note is brand-new and written nothing in it. So am a pen.

after ten days, they are talking to each other:

Note angrily says: I am suffering from you, you thin idiot are always scribbling incorrectly on me. Why don' t you write correctly, why are you always making a lot of mistakes in a sentence?

Pen in return: oh man, don't judge me, you are wrong, I am not a one doing all these things as you told. But I am the poor one who only follows the lord (me). He makes all these mistakes, writes all incorrect sentences, and makes you suffer.

Note: I was wrong with you, I am so sorry.

Pen: All right, He is using the www.italki.com now, so I hope that generous people on the italki will help him to achieve his goal to be a good writer in English.

Note: ok, So do I.

Both: thank you users of the italki for correcting, will correct, and will be correcting my lord's entries. Thus, He will be a good writer in English soon, and We both will be happy. thank you again.

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