My first a note

Hi to all! My name is Dima, and I want to tell you about my republic. The name of the republic that I live is Tuva. The nature here is very beautiful - there are high mountains, clean rivers, fresh air and a lot of different animals. You can fish and hunt here, which is so exciting.
I advise every tourist to visit the republic of Tuva. The end :D
If anybody can help me to practice my english, I will be happy)

My first note

Hi to all,my name is Dima ,and I will tell you about my republic.The name of the republic(country)  I live in is Tuva - Here the nature is very beautiful: high mountains ,clean rivers,fresh air,a lot of different animals .Here you can fish and hunt,it's so exciting.
I advice every tourist to visit the Republic of Tuva.The end :D
If everybody can help me practice my English ,I will be happy)