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Since I was a little kid, my father , a proffesional volleyball player, tried to teach my little brother and I the benefits of living a healthy and active life. We spent hours and hours in the playground trying to learn basic volleyball rules. And today, more then ten years later, I'm teaching others how the simple game rules or habits can be applied in every sphere of our lives. For example, a lot of sacrifice always brings good results. Then, there is a fair-play, team work, responsibility, ups and downs, etc. What I want to say is that when I saw the subject of this TC, I immediatelly thought this was a perfect chance for me because I saw it as an opportunity to contribute in this project with two primary interests in my life – languages and sport.

First of all, as an athlete, I would like to be a part of any opportunity or project that promotes a healthy way of life in general because it aligns with my lifestyle and I want my future profession to go in this direction. Being a part of a team where you can express your thoughts, creativity, ability to listen and learn from others but at the same time keeping your personality unique, it is a great motivation for me.

In addition, as a linguist and philologist, being surrounded by new, creative people from different countries or linguistic areas and interacting with them, brings out the exploratory and scientific side of my personality. An affection for learning foreign languages has helped me many times while finding jobs and I think it's a plus and an advantage in this project too. You could also have said "....and I think it's a plus and advantageuos in this project".

Also, I can’t hide my enthusiasm that the project is taking place in the Netherlands because this year I’ve started learning Dutch and I would be very pleased to be able to work and interact with Dutch people as they are the hosts of the project.

Finally, it would be my first project of this type and I see it as a great opportunity and a challenge to work in an unknown environment. Aside from my personal and proffesional benefit, I’m looking forward to contributing to the creation of something healthy, interesting and positive, because in the end those are the qualities that make our bodies and spirits stronger, which I believe is the vision of this project.

Well done. 

Correct the mistakes please, thank you :)

Since I was a little kid, my father, a professional volleyball player tried to teach my little brother and I the benefits of living a healthy and active life. We were spent hours and hours on a playground trying to learn basic volleyball rules. And today, more then ten years later, I'm teaching others how the simple game rules or habbits can be applied in every sphere of our lives. For example, a lot of sacrifice always brings good results. Then, there is a fair-play, team work, responsibility, ups and downs, etc. What I want to say is that when I saw the subject of this TC, I immediatelly thought this was a perfect chance for me because I saw it as an opportunity to contribute to this project with two primary interests in my life – languages and sport.

First of all, as an athlete, I would like to be a part of any opportunity or project that promotes a healthy way of life in general because it aligns with my lifestyle and I want my future profession to go in this direction. Being a part of a team where you can express your thoughts, creativity, ability to listen and learn from others but at the same time keeping your personality unique, it is a great motivation for me.

In addition, as a linguist and philologist, being surrounded by new, creative people from different countries and other linguistic areas and interacting with them, brings out the exploratory and scientific side of my personality. Affection for learning foreign languages helped me many times while finding jobs and I think it's a plus and an advantage of this project too.

Also, I can’t hide my enthusiasm that the project is taking place in the Netherlands because this year I’ve started learning Dutch and I would be very pleased to be able to work and interact with Dutch people as they are the hosts of the project.

Finally, it would be my first project of this type and I see it as a great opportunity and a challenge to work in an unknown environment. Aside for my personal and professional benefit, I’m looking forward to contributing to the creation of something healthy, interesting and positive, because in the end those are the qualities that make our body and spirit stronger which I believe is the vision of this project.