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How to balance the time between being an internship and a student As i am going to be a school leaver, I choose to be an intern at a foreign company recently. Now a month passed by, I felt it is hard for me to balance my time between work and study. I think there might be two main reason to account for this. First, the distance from my colledge to my company is too far away. It will cost me at least one hour to go to work every morning. Second, the subway rhat i have to take to work is very crowded and make me feel tired every day. So i have to spend much time on the way to work and this make my study time little. However, if i dont take the intership, i will have no advantages when i am haunting for a job. What a complex problem!

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How to balance the time between being an internship and a student

about to leave school, I decided recently to apply to be an intern for a foreign company. However, a month has passed by since then, and thinking about it, I feel it is going to be hard for me to balance my time between work and study. My two main reasons for saying this are; firstly, the distance from my colledge to my company is too great. It will take me at least an hour to go to work every morning. Secondly, the subway that I have to take to work is very crowded.  I am going to feel tired every day, and if i have to spend so much time getting to work, I'm going to have very little time to study. However, if i don't take the internship, I will be at a disadvantage when I am looking for a job. What a difficult problem!

 

Hope you don't mind but I have corrected it to make it sound more like an English person would say it rather than simply correct the grammar.

 

I would advise you to look again at your use of tenses as sometimes I had difficulty deciding whether what you were talking about had already happened, was happening now, or was going to happen.

 

I changed "far away" to "great" because whilst the college would be too far away but a distance can't be.

 

 

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