My experience of travel
The last weekend, I went to my birthplace, there live my parents. It was a day grand because my father and my uncle and me went us to a orchad called Sodomia and we mow plums in several trees, also there are trees of mangos. The Sodomia was of my grandfather. I really like go to there. From the center of the orchad run a little river.
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My travel experience
Last weekend, I went to my birthplace. My parents live there.
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Last weekend, I went to my birthplace, where my parents live.
It was a grand day because my father, my uncle and I went to an orchard called Sodomia and we picked plums from several trees. There were also mango trees. The Sodomia was of my grandfather. I really like go to there. There was a little river that flowed from the center of the orchard.
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My experience of travel experience
The Last weekend, I went to my birthplace (went home), there live my parents where my parents live. It was a great day grand because my father and my uncle and I me went us to an orchard orchad called Sodomia and we picked mow plums from in several trees., also There also were are mango trees of mangos. The Sodomia was of my grandfather's. I really like go to there. A little river runs from the center of the orchad run a little river.
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