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A letter to Kate.
Dear Kate,
I'm glad to hear from you. It's great news that you're considering doing a boat trip with your students. I'm sure you'd have a wonderful day.
It would be better to start the journey at 8 pm, taking the first boat, because there are too many people any later than that. Besides, you'd have more time to enjoy your trip.
My advice is to take a couple of sandwiches and some water, because restaurants are too expensive for students.
I'm sure you'll enjoy the amazing countryside.
The lake is very quiet and it is advisable to try diving, because there is wonderful underwater scenery.
The price is quite cheap, and there are great discounts for student groups above fifteen people, so this wouldn't be a problem.
Don't hesitate to ask me if you have any doubts about your trip.
Best wishes,
Aureli Sanchez.
Hey mate. Good writing. I'm going on a kids camp tomorrow in the Russian wilderness. I'm not sure if there'll be any internet connection. If you don't hear from me for a couple of weeks, that's the reason.
Phil.
Very Good Job Sir !!!
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