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I'm sick today, Is it Halloween ?
Today I'm sick and I'm home. 10 a.m I get up I go to the bathroom. I put my two hands within into the sink and I look at the mirror: a nightmare! My face looked awful as if I didn't sleep during for 3 days. Maybe that was Halloween in advance ? I don't know. Anyway, I used the tap to put water on me, it was the same result. Nothing to do. I haven't really the choice: either I stay in my bed or I look for something useful to do. I chose the last one so I try to right write something or go over my lessons. I don't really know what to say except for that I'm waiting for it to get over.
And you what do you do when you get sick ? My opinion , I feel like I waste my time because I can't do some (space) things which would help me to go ahead.
My I apologize for not be able to write more, my head hurts me so much...
I hope you start to feel better soon. Your entry is very strong overall. I would just point out that there are some past and present tense conflicts within the writing. Meaning, you say things like "I am sick and I am staying home, I put my hands in the sink" etc. But then you write "My face looked awfu" and "I used the tap water." So sometimes you're writing in the present tense and sometimes in the past tense. Try to be consistent. Otherwise, great!
I'm sick today, Is it Halloween ?
Today I'm sick and I'm at home. 10 a.m I get up, and I go to the bathroom. I put my two hands in to the sink and I look the mirror: a nightmare! My face looked awful as if i've had not sleep during 3 days. Maybe that was Halloween in advance ? I don't know. Anyway, I used the tap to put water on me, it was the same result. Nothing to do. I haven't done really the choice: either I stay in my bed or i look for something useful to do. I chose the last one so I'll try to write something or go over my lessons. I don't really know what to say except for I'm waiting to get over it.
And you, what do you do when you get sick ? My opinion: I feel like I waste my time because I can't do some things which would help me to go ahead.
My apologize for not be able to write more, my head hurts me so much...
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