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Thanks for the responses guys. Missy you will need to specify which bits were wrong. I am not sure which bits your referring to. I want to understand some of the suggestions for future reference.

介绍自己 or 自我介绍. What is the difference?

Hank suggested 大家好 to replace 你好. Is 你好 for the singular? Can it be used to speak to a group of more than one?

And the meat of the suggestions,

Courtney li      我想学中国文。请帮助我吧。                    (I want to learn Chinese. Please help me)

Ning                我在学习汉语，请大家帮帮忙                    (I am wanting to practice Chinese Language, please could everyone give a hand)

                        我要学汉语，需要大家帮忙。                    (I want to learn Chinese Language. I need everyone’s help)

Carrie              我想学汉语，希望大家帮忙。                    (I want to learn Chinese Language. I wish/desire for everyone’s help)

Hank               我要学中国文。请大家帮忙。                    (I want to learn Chinese Language. I need everyone’s help)

What’s the difference between 中国文 and 汉语?

Vocabulary

大家 – everyone

帮忙 – to help

希望 – to wish/desire

需要 – to need 

自我介绍:

你好,幸会！

我叫亚当。我要学中国文。请帮忙。

你听懂了吗？ 

你的中文很好呀,我们一起努力学习吧,我在skype里加了你

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