First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, this is Lingling. It's  a magicical when two people can be together virtually. Although we don't know each other, we can still communicate our thoughts through the internet. Only If we are honest, respect each other, and communicate with our hearts, we can become good friends in the virtual world.
I wish you happiness.

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Hi, this is Lingling. It's magical when two people can be together virtually. Although we don't know each other we can still communicate our thoughts through the internet. If we are honest and respect each other, and communicate with our hearts, we can become good friends in the virtual world.
I wish you happiness.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, this is Lingling. It is magic when two people can be together virtually. although we don't know each other, we can communicate our thoughts by internet. Only if we are honest, respect each other, communicate with our hearts, we can become good friends in the virtual world.
Wish you happy.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, this is Lingling. It is a magic when two people can be together virtually. although we don't know each other, we can communicate our thoughts by internet. Only if we are honest, respect each other, communicate with our hearts, we can become good friends in the virtual world.
Wish you happy.