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My first time My first time in the school When I was 5 years old, I went to the school for first time; this day was wonderful for me because I knew news friends and my teacher. My room was very big; it had a lot of chairs and tables. The walls of my rooms were decorated with drawings of dolls and balloons. I studied from 8:00 am to 12:00 pm, we took the break at 9:00 am, and we ate together. We played with dolls and balls, this day the father of my friend Angie went to the school for her in his motorbike then they went to their home then I began to mourn because I had that walk to my house. When I arrived to home, I was very tired but happy because I had a wonderful day. My first time in San Andres When, I was 16 years old, I visited San Andres with my friends of the school. This experience was wonderful for me. I shared beautiful moments with my friends In San Andres, we danced all night and drank beer. I knew news places as the blowhole, Yoniki and the cave of Morgan; I enjoyed very much this experience.

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     When I was 5 years old I went to the school for first time My first day of school was when I was five years old. this That day was wonderful for me because I knew news met new friends and I met my teacher. My classroom was very big; it had a lot of many chairs and tables. The walls of my classroom were decorated with drawings of dolls and balloons. 

     We studied from 8:00 am to 12:00 pm. We took the a break at 9:00 am and we ate to eat together.
We played with dolls and balls. this At the end of that day, the father of my friend Angie's father went to the picked her up from school for her in on his motorcycle, then they went to their and when I saw them riding away, home then I began to mourn it made me sad because I had that to walk to my house.
When I arrived to home I was very tired, but yet I felt happy because I had a wonderful day.

     My first time in San Andres.
     When I was 16 years old I visited took a trip to San Andres with my friends of the from school.
This That experience trip was wonderful for me because of all the I shared beautiful moments fun I had with my friends. In San Andres We danced all night and drank beer all night long. I also vistied knew news places as "The Blowhole," "Yoniki," and "The Cave of Morgan." I enjoyed very much this experience my trip to San Andres.

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My First time in the Day of School 

When I was 5 years old, I went to the school for first time. This day was wonderful for me because I knew news met new friends and my teacher.
My classroom was very big; it had a lot of chairs and tables. The walls of my rooms were decorated with drawings of dolls and balloons.
We studied from 8:00 am to 12:00 pm. We took the a break at 9:00 am and we ate together.
We played with dolls and balls. On  this day the father of my friend Angie's father picked her up from school on went to the school for her in his motorbike and then they went to their home.  then I began to mourn feel sad because I had that walk to my house.
When I arrived to home I was very tired but happy because I had a wonderful day.

My First Time in San Andres
When I was 16 years old I visited San Andres with my friends of the at school.
This experience was wonderful for me. I shared beautiful moments with my friends. 
In San Andres, we danced all night and drank beer.
I knew news experienced new places such as the blowhole, Yoniki and the cave of Morgan. I enjoyed very much this experience very much.

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