The raven.
Paco!... Cried the raven... Paco!... Paaaco!... Cried over and over. Then Paco opened the window and, with a piece of ham in his hands waited patiently till the raven flew to the nearest branch of the tree. Paco stood there for a while scrutinizing the magnificent bright black bird as the raven was looking at him in an inquisitive way as well. Suddenly, as if Papageno y Papagena were singing their duet in the magic flute, both characters in this story joined in a surrealist song full of “Pacos”.
When the training was over, Paco put the ham on the sill and closed the window. He remained there behind the curtains looking how the raven hurried to catch it’s prize and how, with a slight look back as if it would like to thank the human, jumped into the abyss and soared a bit later flying towards who knows where, with the ham in it’s peak.
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The raven.
Paco!... Cried the raven... Paco!... Paaaco!... it cried over and over. Paco opened the window and with a piece of ham in his hands, waited patiently till the raven flew to the nearest branch of a tree. Paco stood there for a while scrutinizing the magnificent bright black bird, all while the raven was looking back at him in an inquisitive way. Suddenly, as if Papageno y Papagena were singing their duet to the magic flute, both characters in this story joined together in a surrealist song full of “Pacos”.
When the training was over, Paco put the ham on the sill and closed the window. He remained there behind the curtains watching how the raven hurried to catch its prize and how, with a slight look back as if it would like to thank the human, jumped into the abyss and soared off, flying towards who knows where, with the ham in its beak.
Thanks for reading and correcting me.
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