My New Mobile Phone.
Few weeks ago, my mobile was broken because of my critical mistake that I fell my cell phone while runnig. The display screen was totally broken and I can't see anything in the screen. I thought my cell phone was insured. So I didn't worry about it but when I stared a step to reward using insurence, I realized that it wasn't insured. It was terrible.
Few days later, I decided hard to buy new one. I chose the Galaxy Note 3. I was surprised because of its high price but I bought it because I had thoght I will buy it someday, if I have a chance.
Now I'm using my new Galaxy. I'm very satisfied with it. It has many special and amazing funtions.
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My New Mobile Phone.
A few weeks ago, my mobile broke because of my a critical mistake that I made: I dropped fell my cell phone while running. The display screen was totally broken, and I couldn't see anything in on the screen. I thought my cell phone was insured, so I didn't worry about it. But when I started a the steps to reward for using the insurance, I realized that it wasn't insured. It was terrible.
A few days later, I decided hard to buy new one. [If you want to use "hard" in this sentence, some examples are: "I made the hard decision of buying a new one." OR "I thought hard about my decision to buy a new one."] I chose the Galaxy Note 3. I was surprised because of its high price but I bought it because I had thought I would buy it someday , if I had the chance.
Now I'm using my new Galaxy. I'm very satisfied with it. It has many special and amazing functions.
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