i have a big family

friends,( We usually don't start this way but it is not wrong; however, it  would be  capitalized)  i  is the oldest  son .He has is twelve years old... Caio is the midle   middle son.. He has  is ten years old and Rafael is the more youngyoungest. He is seven years old.My wife´s name is Iraci. in our house every time have ( there is always noise) ( I didn't understand this).. when i am in my work i call to my wife e listen many noise i ask her.. "my pretty.. have a party today in our house?(I don't understand this.  Do you mean when you at work and call your wife and there   is a lot of noise ,you ask your wife if there is a party going on in your house?)Also we don't say" my pretty" like Minha bonita.  Maybe we would say "honey" without the my . So we say youngest, my middle son, the oldest (son) We don't "have" years He is 10 not he has . We use the idea to be so many years old not to have so many years.Start your sentences with a capital and end with a period.  Also I saw someone who was not a native speaker correct you and he used wanna. Wanna is very informal and really almost a slang. I know it is used all of the time but I wanted you to know that wanna  is not a word that exists in the English language. It is want to. When we speak fast , it sounds like wanna. I think it became popular from the Beatles "I wanna hold your hand." I don't think it would be  appropiate on a journal entry. It is ok on social media. I personally , as an English teacher ,would die before I would ever use "wanna! :)

I have a big family.

Friends, I have a big family. I am 35 years old and I'm married. I have with three sons name Lucas, Caio e and Rafael. Lucas is a the olders elders son and he has twelve is 12 years old, while his brothers Caio is the midle.. he has ten 10 years old and Rafael is the more young he has seven 7 years old. My wife´s name Iraci. in our house every time have noise. When I am in my working I call to my wife e and listen I heard so many noise going on there. Then I ask her; "my pretty, have a party today in our house?

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