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New text I should study more English, because is very important for find a good work. I need more time. I have two little children. They go to school in the morning and at the afternoon go out at the park where they play with yours friends. When it is summer, we are going to beach. We like go for a walk, ride a bicycle and sunbathe too. Here, the time is wonderful.

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I should study more English, because it is very important for find a good work job. I need more time. I have two little (or "young") children. They go to school in the morning and at the afternoon go out at to the park where they play with yours their friends. When it is summer, we are going to a/the beach. We like to go for a walk, ride a bicycle and sunbathe too. Here, the time is wonderful.

 

"Es importante.." - It is important ("it" is necessary in statements such as "Es bueno...It is good" ).

 

"sus amigos" - Their friends (posessive pronoun of they).

 

"vamos a una/la playa" - A beach/The beach (needs a definite article).

 

"Nos gustamos ir..." - We like to go  [when saying "we like + (verb)" use the formula: "I like + to (verb)"]

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