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About time I wish we have more hours in a day, more than 24. The time is headlong stream and flies headily. How can we manage to do everything that we want? So many interesting things are around us. So many places that must be visited and seen by our own eyes! But most of us can't even dream or let themselves to dream about it because of responsibilities, payments, troubles at work and other stuff. Most of us are taking part in race for earning money, go to a job in a stuffy office from 9 a.m. to 6 p.m but often we forget that money is just a paper and its importance is exaggerated. One of my friend said today - "I hate my job but its all that I can do and I don't want change something even when its to heavy and gets almost all my time in a day". It blows my mind!

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About time

I wish we had more hours in a day; more than 24. The Time is a headlong stream and flies headily. How can we manage to do everything that we want to do. So many interesting things are around us, and so many places that must should be visited and seen by our own eyes! But most of us can't even dream or let themselves to dream (Either say "let themselves dream" or "allow themselves to dream")about it because of responsibilities, payments, troubles at work and other stuff. Most of us are taking part in a race to earning money, go to a job in a stuffy office from 9 a.m. to 6 p.m, and often we forget that money is just a paper and its importance is exaggerated. One of my friends said today - "I hate my job but its all that I can do and I don't want change something even when its too heavy and gets almost all of my time in a day". It blows my mind!

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About our presious time

 

I wish there would be more hours in a day, way more than 24. The time is headlong stream and goes too fast. How can we manage to do everything that we want? So many interesting things are around us. So many places that  we could visit and see by our own eyes! But most of us couldn't even dream or let themselves to dream about it because of responsibilities, payments, troubles at work and other things that bother us. Most of us are taking part in a rat race, work hard from 9 a.m. to 6 p.m. We often forget that money is just a piece of paper and its importance is exaggerated. One of my friends said today that he hates his job but it is all that he can do and  he doesn't want change anything even when it is to heavy for him and gets almost all his  time in a day". It blows my mind!

 

 

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Most of us are taking part in race for earning money, -most of us take part is rat race - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rat_race You should use present simple instead of present continues ********* go to a job in a stuffy office from 9 a.m. Go to work in a stuffy office ****** but often we forget that money is just a paper and its importance is exaggerated. We often forget that money is just a piece of paper and its importance is exaggerated ****** One of my friend said today One of my friends said today/ or/ My friend

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