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Picnic
The weather has became warmer and warmer.
So I went to Bu-pyoung Park to have a rest with my friends.
I had bought a tent three days before
.
It is a one-touch type and is very convinient.
We threw a birthday party for one of my friends in tent.
I and A friend bought a cake. but we hadn't candles.
So we turned on the Lighter instead of candles.
It was so much fun.
I'll go there again next time.
Picnic
It The weather has became warmer and warmer, so I went to the Bu-pyoung Park to take have a rest with my friends. I had bought a tent three days before. got a tente what I bought before 3 days.
It is a one-touch type and is very convenient. convinient.
We threw the a birthday party for one of my friends in the tent. tente A friend and I bought a cake with the other friend. But we didn't have any candles. hadn't candle.s.
so We turned on the Lighter instead of candles.
It was so much fun. interested. I'll go there again next time again.
Picnic
It became warmer and warmer.
so I went to the Bu-pyoung Park to take a rest with my friends.
I got a tente there what I bought before 3 days.
It is one-touch type and convinient.
We threw the birthday party for one of friends in tente
I bought a cake with the other friend. but we hadn't candle.s.
so We turned on the Lighter instead of candles.
It was so interested.
I'll go there next time again.
Picnic
It became warmer and warmer.
so I went to the Bu-pyoung Park to take a rest with my friends.
I got a tent what I bought before 3 days.
It is one-touch type and convenient.
We threw the birthday party for one of friends in tent.
I bought a cake with the other friend. but we didn't have candles.
so We turned on the lighter instead of candles.
It was so interested.
I'll go there next time again.
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