our customs

I live in Iran. It is an Islamic country, so most of our customs have religious aspects. Even so, although we have some occasions that is belong to pure solely/purely Iranian. One example is the such as celebration of the longest night on the year, that is which coincides with 21 December 21st. One of the relevant habits tradition in on that nights is eating watermelon and pomegranate, and reading the poetry book of Hafez (one of the most famous poets of Iran). and Another one holiday that comes from our ancestors is the "Chaharshanbe Suri," that which is falls on the last Wednesday on of the year. It is remaining of our ancestors. On this night we make a fire and jump it over it. Our ancestors believed that we tack our unhealthy and give/leave our problems to/in the fire and to give receive it warmth and life. There are more another occasions, but a lot has have been already been forgotten. Iranian people like their traditions and they try to live them, but the government is does not agree with them. They have give a lot of (or use many) reasons like this such as the customs isn't according to contradict our beliefs. We have inherited our culture and we are responsible about that for continuing our traditions.

Overall, great writing! Some of the changes are grammatical, and some are to make the sentances sound more natural. Thanks for teaching us about your cultural traditions - they wound wonderful!

our customs

I live in Iran . It is an Islamic country. so most of our customs have religious aspects. , although we have some customs that are purely Iranian occasions that is belong to pure Iranian such as the celebration of the longest night of on the year which is December 21st. . that is coincides with 21 December . one One of of our traditions on that night  the relevant habits in that nights is to eat  eating watermelon and pomegranate and to read the poems reading poetry book of Hafez ( one of the most famous poets of Iran). and another one Another traditional celebration is " chaharshanbe suri" which is on that is the last Wednesday of on the year. It is a custom from remaining of our ancestors that, on this night, we build make a fire and jump over it it over . Our our ancestors believed that we took our sicknesstack our unhealthy and our problems to the fire and gave give it warmth and life. There are other customs or traditions alsothere are another occasions but a lot has been already forgotten . Iranian people like their traditions and they try to honour or celebrate live them . but the government opposes them is not agree with them. They don't think that these old customs are compatible with Islamic religious beliefs they have a lot of reasons like this customs isn't according to our beliefs. However, we have inherited our culture and we are responsible for keeping it alive. about that.

our customs

I live in Iran . It is an Islamic country. so most of our customs have religious aspects. although we have some occasions that is belong to pure Iranian. such as celebration of the longest night on the year . that is coincides with 21 December . one of the relevant habits in that nights is eating watermelon and pomegranate and reading poetry book of Hafez ( one of the most famous poets of Iran). and another one is the " chaharshanbe suri".that is the last Wednesday on the year. It is remaining of our ancestors. on this night we make fire and jump it over . our ancestors believed that we tack our unhealthy and our problems to the fire and give it warmth and life. there are another occasions but a lot has been already forgotten . Iranian people like their traditions and they try to live them . but government is not agree with them . they have a lot of reasons like this customs isn't according to our beliefs. we have inherited our culture and we are responsible about that.

As this entry has already been corrected twice, I would just like to add that your heading should look like this: Our Customs