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An exciting football match There was an football match in our grade a few days ago.There are 20 classes in our grade and I'm in the class 20.The match had been lasted for nearly a week.The first day,we beat the class 7 by 5 to 0.Can you imagine how excited we were?The players did a good job!The next day,we beat the class 9 by 1 to 0.The third day,(我想说我们和他们0:0踢平了,请问怎么说?)But in the fourth day,we were beaten by 2 to 0.We were sad and disappointed.But in the end,our brother class,win the match.They were NO.1!We were also excited!

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An exciting football match tournament  (match usually means a single game, a tournament is a series of games)

There was a football tournament in our grade a few days ago. There are 20 classes in our grade and I'm in the class 20. The tournament had been lasted for nearly a week. The first day, we beat the class 7 by 5 to 0. Can you imagine how excited we were?The players did a good job! The next day, we beat the class 9 by 1 to 0. The third day, we tied the game at 0 to 0. But in the fourth day, we were beaten by 2 to 0. We were sad and disappointed. But in the end, our brother class won the tournament. They were NO. 1!We were also excited!

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An exciting football match

There was an football match in our grade a few days ago. There are 20 classes in our grade and I'm in the class 20.The match had been lasted for nearly a week.The first day, we beat the class 7 by 5 to 0. Can you imagine how excited we were?The players did a good job! The next day,we beat the class 9 by 1 to 0. The third day,(我想说我们和他们0:0踢平了,请问怎么说?)But on the fourth day, we were beaten by 2 to 0.We were sad and disappointed. But in the end, our brother class won the match. They were NO.1!We were also excited!

 

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