Introduction a bout Dalian
Dalian is a beautiful coastal city which is situated in Northeast China.
It has a modest climate and many people come to enjoy the beach in summer. Some foreign tourists also like to do the traditional physical therapy, like acupuncture and massage.
There are a variety of seafoods supplied in the markets. Most residents here are fascinated by crab, especially in May and October when crab is more delicious. Many kinds of fruits produced here are scrumptious, such as cherry, strawberry, apple, peach, watermelon, grape, persimmon, ...you name it.
Besides the tourism and fishery, the city is also renowned for its status in port, manufacturing, information technology and financial industry. According to a report published by an authority institution, the number of employees working in IT industry in the city has increased from 3,000 to about 170,000 in the last 15 years. The summer annual meeting of World Economic Forum(also called Summer Davos) is held in Dalian every two years.
Dalian is a dynamic city, although the pace of life makes me stressful, I like it.
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Introduction about Dalian
Your English level is great -- actually, most native speakers would make more mistakes (although probably not the same ones).
Here are some corrections:
moderate climate (Although stemming from the same Latin root, "modest" has a rather different meaning.)
There are many varieties of seafood ("food" is generally considered uncountable, but "variety" is countable.)
when crab is most delicious ("most," not "more." It's idiomatic).
in the IT industry (use def article)
of the World Economic Forum (use def article)
make me stressed (the pace is stressful, you are stressed).
Thanks for writing the notebook entry and posting the picture -- It looks like Dalian is an amazing city that I'd never even heard of! I've also never eaten persimmon -- I guess that's one more thing for my to-do list.
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