LETTER OF COMPLAINT (it´s not real :P)

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about my anniversary dinner last week at “The Real Yummiest Restaurant”. It was dreadful last week due to problems with the special offer online and the staff. I purchased a special voucher on www.allvouchers.com, which offered a cheap/an inexpensive romantic dinner for couples in your restaurant. Supposedly this coupon included a tremendous menu with sushi, lobster, white wine, a plethora of “love” desserts, and unlimited drinks, among others things. However, the real menu served to us was not "tremendous" I had bought online. It did not include unrestricted unlimited drinks or sushi. On the other hand, In addition, the dedication cake which that I ordered to make for us was not correct. They wrote “Happy B-day, baby” in spite instead of “I love you, baby”. It was really embarrassing for us.
Furthermore, the restaurant staffs were was bad-mannered when we informed them about this these mistakes very politely. Even They didn´t even want us to write a letter of complaint. My anniversary was an atrocious night, what the likes of which I had never had before.
As if this were not enough, when we were going went to pay the bill, the waiters refused my voucher because I was asking asked for my bill after midnight, therefore it was the following day. According to your waiters, it had to be paid before midnight. I was dying of shame. Finally I had to pay without any discounts.
I would like to get back my money which was a refund for the discounts that were not taken off. I look forward to hearing from you within the next seven days. On the contrary Otherwise, I will have to present a complaint at London City Hall.

Yours faithfully/Thanks in advance.


Javier G (Mrs)


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Thanks in advance for your revisions.

Great letter of complaint, Javier!  Very convincing!

LETTER OF COMPLAINT (it´s not real :P)

Dear Sir/Madam, 

I am writing to complain about my anniversary dinner at “The Real Yummiest Restaurant”. It was dreadful last week due to problems with the special offer online and the staff. I purchased a special voucher on www.allvouchers.com, which offered a cheap romantic dinner for couples in your restaurant. Supposedly this coupon included a tremendous menu with sushi, lobster, white wine, a plethora of “love” desserts, unlimited drinks, etc. However, the real menu served was not what I bought online. It did not include unlimited drinks or sushi. Additionally, the cake which I ordered was incorrect. They wrote “Happy B-day, baby” instead of “I love you, baby”. It was really embarrassing for us.

Furthermore, the restaurant’s staff were bad-mannered when we informed them about this mistake very politely. They didn´t even want us to write a letter of complaint. My anniversary was an atrocious night.

As if this were not enough, when we were going to pay the bill, the waiters refused my voucher because I was asking for my bill after midnight, therefore it was the following day. According to your waiters, it had to be paid before midnight. I was dying of shame. Finally I had to pay without discounts.

I would like to get my money back which was not taken off. I look forward to hearing from you within the next seven days. Otherwise, I will have to present a complaint at London City Hall.

Yours faithfully, 


Mr G Javier (Mrs is for a women, Mr is for a man. If this is your wife writing this, then you can keep it as Mrs).