a horrible tragedy in Taiwan 05/21

This week was really a nightmare to for all people /everyone in Taiwan.

First of all, it has rained for almost the whole /entire week. The road in my school campus even formed a small river, and it was hard for most students riding to ride bikes at to school as usual.

Moreover, there was an earthquake this morning. Though it this is common in Taiwan, we still don't welcome it at all.

And There was one more thing that scared and horrified most people today. A young man, at the age of 21 21 years of age, killed 4 innocent people and hurt more than 10 people with a knife in the MRT (or metro). That was totally a a total tragedy! I can't imagine how could this this could happen...and what's worse, the young man didn't drink or something anything, he did this on purpose...
Omg.. I hope everyone prays for Taiwan... we need a more peaceful and positive power at the very moment.... (sigh)

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A Horrible Tragedy in Taiwan 05/21

This week was really a nightmare to all people in Taiwan.

First of all, it has rained for almost the whole week. The road in my school campus even formed a small river, and it was hard for most students riding bikes at school as usual.

Moreover, there was an earthquake this morning. Though it is common in Taiwan, we still don't welcome it at all.

There was one more thing that scared and horrified most people today; A young man, at the age of 21, killed 4 innocent people and hurt more than 10 people with a knife in the MRT (or metro). That was totally a tragedy! I can't imagine how could this happen, and what's worse, the young man didn't drink or anything, he did this on purpose. 

Omg... I hope everyone prays for Taiwan... We need a more peaceful and positive power at the very moment....(sigh)

a horrible tragedy in Taiwan 05/21

This week was a real nightmare for the people living in Taiwan.

First of all, it has rained for almost the whole week.The road in my school campus even formed a small river ,and it made the trip to school difficult for the students who rode their bikes.

Moreover,there was an earthquake this morning.Though it is common in Taiwan,we still don't welcome them at all.

And there was one more thing that scared, horrified a lot of people today.A young man, at the age of 21, killed 4 and injured more than 10 people with a knife in the MRT (or metro). It was a total tragedy!  I can't imagine how this could've happened...and what's worse,the young man didn't drink or anything, he did this with complete awareness.
Omg.. I hope everyone prays for Taiwan...we need a more peaceful and positive power at this very moment....(sigh)