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Social network profile Hi, I’m Tony, I’m 25 years old and I live in a small town near Caserta, Italy. I’m primarily a student, I’m attending the last year of specialist degree in Mechanical Engineering at Federico II University in Naples but, at the same time, I have a part time job helping high school students with their math homework. If I should describe myself I’d say I’m a sociable, reliable, kind and, sometimes, talkative person. I hope to get to know many people by this social network. See you soon

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Almost perfect, Carmine.  Some minor suggestions:

 

the last year of a specialist degree...

If I were to describe myself...  (More common)

and sometimes talkative person... (Less commas)

many people with this social network...or...through this social network...

 

cioa ciao, complimenti, buona fortuna, Tom

 

 

Social network profile

Hi,
I’m Tony, I’m 25 years old and I live in a small town near Caserta, Italy.
I’m primarily a student, I’m attending the last year of specialist degree in Mechanical Engineering at Federico II University in Naples but, at the same time, I have a part time job helping high school students with their math homework.
If I should describe myself I’d say I’m a sociable, reliable, kind and, sometimes, talkative person.
I hope to get to know many people by this social network.
See you soon

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Thank you very much Louis!
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great job!
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Mrs Mumford could correct my writing, please. Thank you so much. Have a nice day!
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Good morning, thank you

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