Rabbit
I bought 2 rabbits yesterday.they are called panda-rabbits.there are some black blocks in their bodies.And the other places in their bodies are white.They looks like pandas at a distance.They are so cute.
And they are always eating at daytime.I doubt whether I can feed them if they keep eating like this.^_^
After all,it is a enjoyable thing to raise them.I will take care of them.
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Rabbit
I bought 2 rabbits yesterday. They are called panda-rabbits. There are some black blocks (spots) in on their bodies. And and the other places in their bodies are white (The are white with some black spots). They looks like pandas at a distance. They are so cute.
And they are always eating at in the daytime. I doubt whether I can feed them if they keep eating like othis.^_^ (I am not sure I will be able to feed them if they keep eating like this)
Over all/In general After all, it is an enjoyable thing to raise them. I will take (good) care of them.
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Good job! Please notice the spaces you forgot to put in; they are highlighted in green. The blue words are suggestions by myself which would sound more natural. If I can help you with anything else, please let me know :-)
I hope you enjoy your new rabbit friends!
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