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selfishness The world is so selfish . I have a keen observation about the people , that there is always some reason behind any act they do , whether its love or it may be war. in simple word ,behind every act there is some hidden intreste . i have seen it manifestation in every sphere of life , in domestic level , where a mother take care of her baby ,because she love her , or international level,where a state suppress the other just because of gaining power ( lust of power ) . Even in religion , we just worship god , so that he may please with us and bestow us from his reward . Isn't it selfishness .

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selfishness

The world is so selfish . I have a keen observation about the people.  That is that there is always some reason behind any act they do , whether its in love or it may be war.  In simple word Put simply, behind every act action there is some hidden intreste interest .  I have seen it manifestation manifested in every sphere of life , in at the domestic level , where a mother takes care of her baby ,because she loves her , or at the international level,where a state suppresses the other another just because of gaining to gain power ( lust of for power ) . Even in religion , we just only worship God , so that he will be may pleased with us and bestow us from his with rewards . Isn't it selfishness selfish?

 

When you talk about the god of the Abrahamic religions, you capitalize God.  If you are talking about an ancient Greek, Egyptian, or one of the Hindu gods, its in the lower case.  

Good job Adil.

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Selfishness

The world is full of selfish people is so selfish . I have am a keen oberver of  observation about the people. , that There is always some reason behind any act they do, whether its love or it may be war. In simple words, behind every act there is some hidden self intereste . I have seen its manifestation in every sphere of life., in For example on a domestic level, where a mother takes care of her baby, ,because she loves it  her , or on an  international level, where a one state country suppresses the another in order to gain  just because of gaining power ( lust of power ). Even in religion, we just worship God, so that he may be pleased with us and bestow us from with his rewards . Isn't it selfishness? .

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