The Beach and the Wind

     Today my boyfriend invited me to go to the beach with him. He likes to do kitesurf, and this afternoon is was ideal for this sport because there´s it was windy; too much windy for me, and there´s no sun was not out. I like the beach, but I like it with a blue, clam, sunny sky. sun and no wind I think that the wind and the beach aren't compatible. You I can't enjoy reading a book because sand goes blows into your my eyes, while and wind disarrange your messes my long hair. and I ´ve got very long hair When there´s it is windy, the air temperature goes down falls, and you I feel cold, even when it is actually 19 degrees. of temperature (yes...I´m very sensitive to cold). So Because of these reasons, I told him to go to the beach by himself, alone and to enjoy doing his favorite sport while I stayed at home trying to studying English.

Hi Roxi, Great job. Recuerde que debe mantener los tiempos verbales constante, y el punto de vista, ya sea en la primera o tercera persona. Cual son sus playas favoritas? 

Beach and wind

Today my boyfriend invited me to go to the beach with him. He likes to do kitesurfing  and this afternoon is ideal for this sport because there´s wind....too much wind, and there´s no sun. I like the beach , but with a blue sky, sun and no wind. I think that wind and beach aren´t compatible. You cant´t  can't enjoy reading a book cause the sand goes into your eyes while wind disarrange  messes your hair (and I ´ve got very long hair!). When there´s wind, temperature goes down and you feel cold, even when it is 19 degrees of temperature (yes...I´m very sensitive to cold). So I told him to go alone by himself and to enjoy doing his favorite sport, while I stay at home trying to study english.