ON CHARITY WORK
With the development of the economy and society in our country,the charity work has gradually becoming a main point the people focus on by now.
Some think that the charity work is the business of rich men,it has nothing to do with middle-class.For the celebrities have enough money to contribute with.Otherwise,others believe that everybody has equal right to do that for the poor.
In my opinion,everybody should pay attention to the charity work.Firstly,the notable people should go ahead to take a example for others.Besides,the government must appeal citizens of doing that.Last but not least,that's the cause of own ourselves,we can make a little efforts to the poor who really need help.The main point of the charity work is not how much you pay ,just is whether you did or not.And I think the each one gathers together and will makes a big difference.
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ON CHARITY WORK
With the development of the economy and ??? society in our country, the charity work has gradually is becoming an increasingly important focal main point the people focus on by now.
Some think that the charity work is the business of the rich men, that it has nothing to do with the middle-class and that For the celebrities have contribute enough money already to contribute with. Otherwise Others believe that everybody has equal right duty to do that for the poor.
In my opinion,everybody should pay attention to the charity work. Firstly,the notable people should go ahead to and set make an example for others. Besides, In addition the government must appeal to citizens to do likewise of doing that. Last but not least, that's the cause of own ourselves,we can make a little effort to for the poor who really need help. The main point of the charity work is not how much you pay, just is but whether you did or did not. And I think the each one if everyone gathers pulls together and it will make a big difference.
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ON CHARITY WORK
With the development of the economy and society in our country, the charity work has gradually becoming a major focal point for people right now.
Some think that the charity work is the business of rich men, and that it has nothing to do with the middle-class. They think that it is only for the celebrities that have enough money to contribute with. Otherwise, Others believe that everybody has an equal responsibility to help the poor.
In my opinion, everybody should pay attention to the charity work. Firstly, the notable people should go ahead and set a example for others. Besides this, the government must appeal to citizens to help out. Last but not least, is the case of own ourselves, we can all make a little effort for the poor who really need our help. The main point of the charity work is not how much you pay, but whether you did it or not. And I think the each one gathers if we all work together, it will make a big difference.
(using "the notable people" in English doesn't make it clear who you are talking about. You could say "famous people", "well-known figures in society", "celebrities", etc.")
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