IELTS letter

This is a letter, I have written as a part of my IELTS preparation. I would be grateful to anyone, who will check my grammar. Thank you.

Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to airline. In your letter, you should explian:
* where and when you lost your bag
* what your bag looks like
* what its content were

Dear Sir/Madam

Last Tuesday I had been flying flew from New York to Paris with your airlilne., using service of your company. Unfortunately, after the trip had finished, I left one of my bags in/on the plane. It was completely my fault, I was in a hurry and I forgot it this bag threw out of my head. I left it under the seat which was in front of me.

I discovered my loss only once I reached at home, and now I am writing this letter to you, hoping to get my things bag back.

It is a small handbag, made of brown leather. It has two compartments. In first there was a blue photo Sony camera and its charger. charging device for it. The brand of camera is Sony. In the second compartment part there were a bottle of water and a  handkerchief. The pictures on the camera which stored on this camera, are very valuable for to me.

 If your staff have found this bag (or not) Please contact with me through via email to confirm whether or not my bag has been found., I will be very grateful.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Georgiy Ivanov

IELTS letter

This is a letter, I have written as a part of my IELTS preparation. I would be grateful to anyone, who will check my grammar. Thank you.

Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to airline. In your letter, you should explian:
* where and when you lost your bag
* what your bag looks like
* what its content were

Dear Sir/Madam

Last Tuesday I flew from New York to Paris using service of your company. Unfortunately, after the trip had finished, I left one of my bags in the plane. It was completely my fault; I was in a hurry and it slipped my mind. I left the bag under the seat in front of me.

I discovered my loss only after arriving home, and now I am writing this letter to you in hopes of recovering my things.

It is a small handbag made of brown leather. It has two compartments. In first there was a blue digital camera and charging device for it. The camera's brand is Sony. In the second part, there was a bottle of water and a handkerchief. The pictures stored on this camera are very valuable for me.

Please contact me via email and let me know if your staff has or has not found the bag.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you for your time,
Georgiy Ivanov