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What do you do on rainy days?
Within an hour it will be midnight here. It’s raining outside, bringing some vividness to this silent night.
On rainy days, I don't feel like working that much. I open the windows to let the fresh air in, make some coffee and read on the sofa. I Lie in bed and turn on some soft music; the sound of rain drops are the best accompaniment.
Rainy days make me not want to go outside. Thus, it can be an opportunity to get away from city noises and heavy traffic and to have some alone time. I guess rainy days explain the saying "the beauty of doing nothing."
or:
Within an hour it will be midnight here. It’s raining outside, bringing some vividness to this quiet night.
I don't feel like working that much on rainy days. I open the windows to let the fresh air in, make some coffee and read on the sofa. I turn on some soft music and lie in bed; the sound of rain drops being the best accompaniment.
Rainy days make me want to stay inside. Thus, it can be an opportunity to get away from city noises and heavy traffic; to have some alone time. I guess rainy days explain the saying "the beauty of doing nothing."
or:
It will be midnight soon, and it’s raining outside, adding some vividness to stillness of the night.
I don't feel like working much on rainy days. I open windows to let in fresh air, make some coffee and read on the sofa. Lying in bed with some soft music I have the accompanying sound of rain drops to enhance the mood.
Days like this make me want to stay inside. Thus, it is an opportunity to get away from the noises of the city and to have some time alone. I guess rainy days can explain the saying "the beauty of doing nothing."
Your English is very good. The changes I’ve made have very few corrections and are mostly to present you with some different styles of writing. It is not always easy to describe things that will allow the reader to see and feel what you are seeing. You have done this very well. Keep writing. You tell good stories.
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