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World Cups? Can you correct this text please? I'd thank you so much! ---------------------- Many people, even before our president, realized that Brazil can't recieve the World Cup. And, that is the result by a corrupt government. The protests are happening because the government don't listen his population. They keep saying all the time that we have conditions to recieve all the people, tourists... But, what about our own population? So, I believe we are taking our chances, and trying to make a difference. And, I don't know very well about politic, but... This could be as a bad thing as a good thing. So, I recommend to all of you who is thinking to come to Brazil, please, don't come. You'll help us in this cause. ---------------------- I'm sorry for the thought, but I didn't know what to write, and I just can think it. I recognize that may people don't agree with me, and I respect that. Just give it a try. Thank you all. ------------------

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World Cup?

Can you correct this text please?
I'd thank you so much!
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Many people, even our president, have realized that Brazil can't host the World Cup.
And this is because the government is corrupt.
The protests are happening because the government is not listening to its' people.
They keep saying all the time that we have the resources to welcome tourists to the country... But, what about our own population?
So, I believe we are taking our chances, and trying to make a difference (not sure what you're referring to?) 
And, I don't know much about politics, but... This idea could be as good as it is bad.
So, I recommend to all of you who are thinking about coming to Brazil, please, don't come.
You'll help us in our campaign by doing so.
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I'm sorry for the thought, but I didn't know what to write, and I just can think it.
I recognize that may people don't agree with me, and I respect that.
Just give it a try.
Thank you all.
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