Human Progress

It is a people’s common wish for people to live a better life. To Toward do this end, generations of talents have been striving striven for to progress of humanity.

The What is most remarkable of all the progress achieved, I think, is science and technology. Progress of science and technology in the past had eventually led to the industrial revolution, which made it possible to produce goods more efficiently than ever before without much laborious work less labour. Electrical and electronic technologies have eliminated darkness almost everywhere where people reside in. The information technologies based on these technologies have greatly improved the speed and convenience of communication. In short, the achievements of science and technology can best illustrate our glorious civilisation.

However, there are numerous areas that are yet to be improved. The least developed area among all is the understanding of human beings, ourselves. We still cannot figure out the secrets of happiness -- what makes us feel happy. Why do so many people suffer distress and even consequently commit suicide despite all the human progress that is supposed to make us happier? In addition to this, a growing number of people are concerned about the underachievement of the progress of world politics. The world is still far from being peaceful. A great number of countries, such as Russia, that have abundant resources go to war with other countries because of greedy. This is a causes of a great number of tragedies.

Over course of/Throughout the history of humanity, we have made enormous achievements achieved enormously in many fields. Yet the human race is only a humble species in the long history of the earth and the universe, and we have many fields in which we need to make progress. What lies ahead are endless challenges.

Human Progress

It is people’s common wish to live for people to want a better life. To do this, Toward this end, generations of talents have striven for the progress of humanity.

The most remarkable of all the progress, I think, is science and technology. Progress of science and technology in the past such progress  had eventually led to the industrial revolution, which made it possible to produce goods more efficiently than ever before without much laborious work. Electrical and electronic technologies have eliminated darkness almost everywhere people reside in. The information technologies based on these technologies have greatly improved the speed and convenience of communication. In short, the achievements of science and technology can best illustrate our glorious civilisation.

However, there are numerous areas that are yet to be improved. The least developed among all is the understanding of human beings, ourselves. We still cannot figure out the secrets of happiness -- what makes us feel happy. Why do so many people suffer distress and even consequently commit suicide despite all the human progress that is supposed to make us happier? In addition to this, a growing number of people are concerned about the ineffectiveness/underachievement of the progress of world politics. The world is still far from being peaceful. A great number of countries such as Russia, that have abundant resources, go to war with other countries because of greedy. This causes a great number of tragedies.

Over the history of humanity, we have achieved so much/enormously improved enormously in many fields. Yet the human race is only a humble species in the long history of the earth and the universe, and we have many fields in which we need to make progress. What lies ahead are endless challenges.

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Human Progress

It is people’s common wish to live a better life. To do this, generations of talents have striven for progress of humanity.

The most remarkable of all the progress, I think, is science and technology. Progress of science and technology in the past had eventually led to industrial revolution, which made it possible to produce goods more efficiently than ever before without much laborious work. Electrical and electronic technologies have eliminated darkness almost everywhere people reside in. The information technologies baseding on these technologies have greatly improved the speed and convenience of communication. In short, the achievements of science and technology can best illustrate our glorious civilisation.

However, there are numerous areas that are yet needed to be improved. The least developed among them is the understanding of human beings, ourselves. We still cannot figure out the secrets of happiness -- what makes us feel happy. Why do so many people suffer distress and even consequently commit suicide despite all the human progress that is supposed to make us happier? In addition to this, a growing number of people are concerned about the underachievement of the progress of world politics. The world is still far from being peaceful. A great number of countries, such as Russia, that have abundant resources, go to war with other countries because of greedy. This causes a great number of tragedies.

Over the history of humanity, we have achieved enormously in many fields. Yet the human race is only a humble speciesy in the long history of the earth and the universe, and we have many fields in which we need to make progress. What lies ahead are endless challenges.