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my topic class! Carol: The topic that we going to talk is about alternative versus traditional medicine. Since appear the medicine, understand how specialty dedicated to curing somatic and psychological diseases, there has been a dispute between the alternative, which is responsible for preventing, and traditional which is responsible for curing. Saúl: In West, we are more risk and much more got us to use the traditional medicine. When we happen ourselves something, we go to the hospital to consume a medicine, which is the doctor prescribes us to be healing soon and with that, we will can to continue with our lives. We have a life’s style so quickly! Carol: But the alternative medicine is any practice that is put forward as having the healing effects of medicine . It consists of a wide range of health care practices, products and therapies, using alternative medical diagnoses Examples of alternative medicine include homeopathy, naturopathy, energy medicine and acupuncture. This type of medicine is a medicine of health and focuses on maintaining that health before it reaches the point of dysfunction Saúl: I see but, do you know the term “alternative medicine” is a dishonest term to make an illusion that a treatment not confirm that it isn´t confirm? Have a bit evidences that this type of medicine is effective, totally. However, we know that the medicines, which are prescribe by the doctor, can health and are much expensive. Carol: Are there Little evidences? In China use a lot it! Instead off taking medication, which side effects causes so much ills, utilize agricultural products preventing those ills. As example, have a tea. Saúl: You have a point, although we can’t to use neither the alternative medicine only; I think that to use both method is the best option, because the final objective is our health. We should be more opening minded, to accepted the two types of medicine and we use it in the great situation. Thanks for your information.

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Carol, this is going to be SUPER HARD to correct. I know a great deal about alternative medicine so I'll give it a shot, but I really wish I had the original Spanish if you translated it! 

 

my topic class! The Class Topic:


Carol: The topic that we going to talk is about alternative versus traditional medicine.

 

Since appear the medicine, understand how specialty dedicated to curing somatic and psychological diseases, there has been a dispute between the alternative, which is responsible for preventing, and traditional which is responsible for curing.

 

I'm just going to try to re-write this the best I can even though it doesn't really make sense. I'll guess at what you are trying to say given the subject: Since the advent of modern medicine with it's intention of curing somatic and psychological diseases there has been a dispute betwee alternative medicine (which is responsible for preventing) and traditional medicine (modern medicine) which is responsible for curing disease. 

 

I must tell you that this makes no sense at all because it's the opposite. Modern medicine treats symptoms and does not cure while alternative medicine tries to prevent AND cure disease at it's root. 

Saúl: In West, we are more risk and much more got us to use the traditional medicine. When we happen ourselves something, we go to the hospital to consume a medicine, which is the doctor prescribes us to be healing soon and with that, we will can to continue with our lives. We have a life’s style so quickly!

 

I'll try again, whew, this has to be the hardest correction I've ever done!

In the west we are more at risk since we use tradtional medicine more. When we have an accident or get sick we go to the hospital to get medication prescribed and then can go about our lives. We resume our previous lifestyles very quickly with modern medicine. 



Carol: But the alternative medicine is any practice that is put forward as having the healing effects of medicine . It consists of a wide range of health care practices, products and therapies, using alternative medical diagnoses Examples of alternative medicine include homeopathy, naturopathy, energy medicine and acupuncture. This type of medicine is a medicine of health and focuses on maintaining that health before it reaches the point of dysfunction

 

However, alternative medicine is any practice that proclaims to have healing effects. It consists of a wide range of healthcare practices that use alternative methods of diagnosis. Examples of alternative medicine would include homeopathy, naturopathy, energy healing and acupuncture. These types of treatments focus on producing health instead of just treating disease symptoms after the imbalance reaches the point of dysfunction like modern medicine does. 

Saúl: I see but, do you know the term “alternative medicine” is a dishonest term to make an illusion that a treatment not confirm that it isn´t confirm? Have a bit evidences that this type of medicine is effective, totally. However, we know that the medicines, which are prescribe by the doctor, can health and are much expensive.

 

I understand but I think the term "alternative medicine" is a misrepresentation in that it alludes to treatments that cannot be confirmed as viable. Do you have one bit of evidence that this type of "medicine" is totally effective? We know for a fact that the medications that are prescribed by an MD can heal and are expensive. 

Carol: Are there Little evidences? In China use a lot it! Instead off taking medication, which side effects causes so much ills, utilize agricultural products preventing those ills. As example, have a tea.

 

What do you mean there is little evidence!? China main form of medicine is alternative! Instead of taking medication which causes so many side effects they use herbs to prevent and treat disease. They use herbal teas. 


Just to make sure you know, Traditional Chinese Medicine uses a whole lot more than teas. :) 


Saúl: You have a point, although we can’t to use neither the alternative medicine only; I think that to use both method is the best option, because the final objective is our health. We should be more opening minded, to accepted the two types of medicine and we use it in the great situation. Thanks for your information.

 

You have a point. We dont' have to choose between alternative and traditional forms of medicine. It is my opinion that it's best to use both because the final objective is to maintain and gain health. We need to be more open-minded, to accept the two types of medicine and use them appropriately in accordance with the individual's situation. Thanks for your information. 

 

I must let you know that I'm not sure I got this right but I tried my best! It's a good subject so I just had to give it a shot. :D

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I want to point out a mistake I make because American's make this mistake by accident all the time. 

It's vs Its

 

It's = It is. "It's" is an abbreviation for it is. Anywhere you can use it is, you can use it's. 

 

The possessive for of it, meaning belong to it, does not use an apostrophe. Its not It's. In my correction I put an "It's" instead of an "Its". 

 

Since the advent of modern medicine with it's intention...

That's incorrect. 

 

We are talking abou the intention of modern medicine so it's the possessive so no apostrophe. 

 

You can't say Sinc ethe advent of modern medicine with it is intenion therefore, you cannot use "it's". 

 

That's a typo that happens to us a lot, but that doesn't mean you should do as we do! :) 

 

Sorry about makng so many typos. I hit submit before reading it over by accident. 

 

 

 

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