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not lucky day
Today is a rainy day, it has rained all day. I can't use my telephone, so instead I just use my computer. This morning, I watched 《画皮||》although this movie came out a few years ago, i think it is worth rewatching. the movie is about a man, a woman and a fox. It's a love story, the fox has lived for a long long time, but she can’t smell the flowers, and doesn't have a heart or body temperature. The fox must find a heart which will allow the fox to be warm again. She finds it from a girl who loves a man.
(I can't correct the remaining text as I haven't seen the movie and the plot seems a little complicated, but I hope you like the first part that I have corrected for you, best wishes, Catherine)
there she is a girl not a princess。the girl changed ugly in a snows day。the man protect the princess,but its late 。eight years and seven months ago。the princess find the man who was a general. in the road,the princess helped a girl which is a fox。the general confused by fox,beacuse she looks very beautiful。the princess sadness ,she want to die ,but the fox helped she ,then change the face begin 。it can be coutinues 12 hours。in the 12 hours,the princess is pain and happiness 。
the reality is cruel。the king of tiablang want the princess marry with their prince。the fox talk with princess,if you willingly send your heart to me,i can instead of you。 you cant smell the flowers, no heart,and you must eat heart everyday ,but you can stay with your lover。its happiness for us。she promised。
the fox married with a man who is died and have no heart which is killed by she 。the wizard and the king telled she,she must give her heart to prince。its sadness for she!
the another side ,the princess is changed the fox,the general telled to she,i love you not beacuse of your face,i just confused by fox,i really love you,my eyes dont let it (the general killed his eyes)。now,we must turn back your heart。
finally,the fox willingly her heart to save the princess ,and they both live。the princesss changes beautiful and have a hot heart 。
they have a happy ending!
他们执着的不敢前进,却又勇敢的争取所想。无关秋风春月,只愿琴瑟在御,岁月静好......
求高手指点!谢谢!
the movie of the画皮||
Today is raining day .it rained all day .my tellphione can not use .so i just use the computer.in the morning , i watched 《画皮||》.although this movie issued a few years ago,but i think it is value of repeated viewing 。it says a man,
a woman and a fox ’s love story.the fox is lived for a long long time .but she can’t smell the flowers ,doesnt have heart and body temperature 。so she must find a heart witch can willingly send himselves hot heart 。she find it !it is a girl who love a man 。
there she is a girl not a princess。the girl changed ugly in a snows day。the man protect the princess,but its late 。eight years and seven months ago。the princess find the man who was a general. in the road,the princess helped a girl which is a fox。the general confused by fox,beacuse she looks very beautiful。the princess sadness ,she want to die ,but the fox helped she ,then change the face begin 。it can be coutinues 12 hours。in the 12 hours,the princess is pain and happiness 。
the reality is cruel。the king of tiablang want the princess marry with their prince。the fox talk with princess,if you willingly send your heart to me,i can instead of you。 you cant smell the flowers, no heart,and you must eat heart everyday ,but you can stay with your lover。its happiness for us。she promised。
the fox married with a man who is died and have no heart which is killed by she 。the wizard and the king telled she,she must give her heart to prince。its sadness for she!
the another side ,the princess is changed the fox,the general telled to she,i love you not beacuse of your face,i just confused by fox,i really love you,my eyes dont let it (the general killed his eyes)。now,we must turn back your heart。
finally,the fox willingly her heart to save the princess ,and they both live。the princesss changes beautiful and have a hot heart 。
they have a happy ending!
他们执着的不敢前进,却又勇敢的争取所想。无关秋风春月,只愿琴瑟在御,岁月静好......
求高手指点!谢谢!
the moive of 画皮||
Today is raining day .it rained all day .my tellphione can not use .so i just use the computer.in the morning , i watched 《画皮||》.although this movie issued a few years ago,but i think it is value of repeated viewing 。it says a man,
a woman and a fox ’s love story.the fox is lived for a long long time .but she can’t smell the flowers ,doesnt have heart and body temperature 。so she must find a heart witch can willingly send himselves hot heart 。she find it !it is a girl who love a man 。
there she is a girl not a princess。the girl changed ugly in a snows day。the man protect the princess,but its late 。eight years and seven months ago。the princess find the man who was a general. in the road,the princess helped a girl which is a fox。the general confused by fox,beacuse she looks very beautiful。the princess sadness ,she want to die ,but the fox helped she ,then change the face begin 。it can be coutinues 12 hours。in the 12 hours,the princess is pain and happiness 。
the reality is cruel。the king of tiablang want the princess marry with their prince。the fox talk with princess,if you willingly send your heart to me,i can instead of you。 you cant smell the flowers, no heart,and you must eat heart everyday ,but you can stay with your lover。its happiness for us。she promised。
the fox married with a man who is died and have no heart which is killed by she 。the wizard and the king telled she,she must give her heart to prince。its sadness for she!
the another side ,the princess is changed the fox,the general telled to she,i love you not beacuse of your face,i just confused by fox,i really love you,my eyes dont let it (the general killed his eyes)。now,we must turn back your heart。
finally,the fox willingly her heart to save the princess ,and they both live。the princesss changes beautiful and have a hot heart 。
they have a happy ending!
他们执着的不敢前进,却又勇敢的争取所想。无关秋风春月,只愿琴瑟在御,岁月静好......
求高手指点!谢谢!
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