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help me to correct mistakes in my composition,please
Dear George,
I was glad to receive your letter! I'm sorry I haven't answered earlier ,but I was really busy with my school.
Well, I think that everyone should know about ecological conditions of their cities, countries and the planet as a whole and how it could be improved so ,in my opinion, ecology should be a school subject.Also you asked me about my classmates. Most of them are friendly and can help you anytime. What about Eco project, I would like to join the project to rid the planet of rubbish.
By the way, when are you going to show your presentation? Why did you choose the project about air pollution? Are you interested in other project
Anyhow, I'd better move at once.. Mum asked me to help her with the housework.Hope to hear from you soon!
All my love,
Nastya.
I am also doing eco friendly business.
help me to correct mistakes in my composition,please
Dear George,
I was happy to get your letter! I'm sorry I haven't answered earlier but I was really busy with my at school.
Well, I think that everyone should know about the ecological conditions of their cities, countries and the planet as a whole and how it they could be improved. so ,In my opinion, ecology should be a school subject. Also, you asked me about my classmates. Most of them are friendly and always helpful. can help you anytime. You asked about the What about eco project, I would like to join the project to rid the planet of rubbish.
By the way, when are you going to give show your presentation? Why did you choose the project about air pollution project? Are you interesting interested in another projects too?
Anyway, I'd better go now. Mum asked me to help her with the housework. Hope to hear from you soon!
All my love, (Unless George is your boyfriend I would not say "all my love". Perhaps regards or fond regards would be better in this instance.)
Nastya.
Dear George,
I was happy to get your letter! I'm sorry I haven't didn't answered earlier but I was really very busy with school work.
Well, I think that everyone should know about ecological conditions of their cities, countries and the planet as a whole and how it could be improved. In my opinion, ecology should be a school subject. Also, you asked me about my classmates. Most of them are friendly and can help you anytime. What about your eco project? I would like to join the project to rid the planet of rubbish.(garbage or pollution might be better)
By the way, when are you going to show your presentation (to me or to the class)? Why did you choose the project about air pollution? Are you interesting in another projects?
Anyway, I'd better go now. My Mom asked me to help her with the housework. Hope to hear from you soon!
All my love,
Nastya.
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