How beautiful a tear could can be.

Five years ago, I met a girl in an study room. I didn't realize how great of an influence she brought to me my life until we departed. We were deskmates, properly technically speaking. Our seats were nearby during at a long table. She sat on my left hand. Usually, we didn't talk to each other because we all have been were busy for with the postgraduate qualifying exam. What's more, whenever we did talk, most of our topics were around the studies. I think it could would have be been an ordinary day if I haven't hadn't seen the a particular moment.
It was about nine o'clock. I have had finished my daily math study, and to take a rest was taking a break. Unconsciously Subconsciously, I turned my head to know see what she was doing. Then it came to me. A tear, as big as a mid-size pearl that was as pure as a crystal. was coming out It came from her right eye socket, flowing past slowly down her cheek slowly, and then falling down to the floor. It I was very shocked me a lot. I felt it dropped as if it dropped into my heart, like a drop of water dropped on a quiet lake. Even now I still could feel can remember that feeling. It was unbelievable that a tear could be so beautiful. I asked, "what happened?" She said that she have had been moved by a friend.
But Now we don't communicate for no any reason even through though we live in the same city. What a pity! I'm considering to keep the in touch with her.

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How beautiful a tear could can be.

Five years ago, I met a girl in an study room. I didn't realize how great an  influence she had on  brought to me until we  parted departed . We were deskmates, properly speaking, our seats were nearby during at a long table. She sat on my lefthand side. Usually we hardly spoke didn't talk each other because we all have all been busy for with the postgraduate qualifying exam. What's more, most of our topics conversations were around the our studies. I think it would have been normal if could be ordinary if I haven't hadn't noticed seen the moment.
It was about nine o'clock. I have had finished my daily Math study, and was taking a break to take a rest. Unconsciously I turned my head to know see what she was doing. Then I saw it. it came to me. A tear, big as a medium sized mid-size pearl, pure as crystal, was coming out from her right eye socket, slowly rolling down her right flowing past her cheek slowly, and then it fell falling down to the floor. I was very shocked. It shocked me a lot. It felt as though her tear had dropped onto my heart felt it dropped into my heart, like a water dropped on a quiet lake. Even now I can still could feel that feeling. Unbelievable that a tear could be so beautiful. I asked :"What's wrong what happened?", She said she have been was moved by a friend. ?
But now we don't communicate at all for no reason. Even through we live in the same city. What a pity! I'm considering to keeping the in touch with her./Making contact with her.