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So i want to remove mistakes in my written so i decided to write some short stories by myself.first i read a story from the book and understand it. after that i write it on notebook and whenever i get free time i will post it here to know my mistakes. so, here is my first story.
Story name : Rimmy and Cake
Rimmy has a holiday today. So,she is at home. Rimmy has some free time so she decides to bake a cake with her mother.she bakes a cake with her mother.Mother put the cake on the table.There is a rat under the table. Rimmy and mother go to wash their hands.The rat jumps onto the table and takes a huge bite of the cake. Suddenly rimmy comes back. She sees the rat. Rimmy screams "Mother !!"
The rat looks toward the rimmy when she screams.Rat gets afraid and rat runs away.
Rimmy saves the cake :from the rat ;)
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First Posting
I wanted to improve my writing, so I decided to write some short stories. First I will read a story from the book. Then I will copy it into a notebook, and whenever I get some free time I will post it here for corrections. Here is my first story.
Rimmy and the Cake
Rimmy has a holiday today. She is at home. Rimmy decides to bake a cake with her mother. When it is ready, mother puts the cake on the table. There is a rat under the table. Rimmy and mother go to wash their hands. The rat jumps onto the table and takes a huge bite out of the cake. When Rimmy comes back, she sees the rat. "Mother !!" she screams.
The rat sees her, gets afraid, and runs away.
Rimmy has saved the cake from the rat ;)
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