My First Post :)

So i want to remove mistakes in my writing so I decided to write some short stories by myself. First I read a story from the book and understand it. After that i write it in my notebook and whenever i get free time I will post it here to know my mistakes. So, here is my first story.

Story name : Rimmy and Cake

Rimmy has a holiday today. So, she is at home. Rimmy has some free time so she decides to bake a cake with her mother. She bakes a cake with her mother. Mother put the cake on the table. There is a rat under the table. Rimmy and mother go to wash their hands. The rat jumps onto the table and takes a huge bite of the cake. Suddenly Rimmy comes back. She sees the rat. Rimmy screams "Mother !!"

The rat looks toward Rimmy when she screams. The rat gets afraid and rat runs away.

Rimmy saves the cake from the rat ;)