A letter to the editor

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in regard to your recent review of the last outdoor theatre performance where I was last weekend. I feel I have to express my disagreement with several of your comments as follows.
Firstly, the beginning was delayed and it made people disappointed. There were lots of people who waited for hours to start the show. Although the organisers knew about this delay they didn't advise the spectators. Everyone who were there was angry and impatient.
I strongly disagree with your response to the rain.You should have been prepared for the worst and make a plan B just in case it rains.Every spectators got soaked because you didn't do anything, therefore, the viewers can't enjoy the outdoor performance.It was outrageous and this was the reason why lots of people went home before the end. 

Furthermore,regarding the problem with the sound quality, during the interlude I didn't hear anything well. You could have corrected it in the second part so this problem was quickly resolved.
In conclusion, apart from these defects the whole event was a success, for example the artists played well and this is the most important thing. I hope, therefore, that you will print this letter together with an apology to the performers, readers and event organisers like myself, who are looking forward to a similar event in the near future.

Yours faithfully,
Kinga