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TGIF!! Today is friday !! i'm so excited and itchy to go home now.. i'm wokring but i have nothing to do honestly.. i don't know why my boss hired me. i've been thinking that since 4-5months ago haha and tomorrow i will have my birthday party cuz next monday is my birthday!(Thank you guys) i'm obssed with foosball.. you know table soccer.. sounds stupid haha but i have awesome foosball team i don't think i can live without foosball table. i like this site cuz we don't know each other at all and i can write what i want to say i don't use FB. it doesn't protect our privacy i think. when i go to US and Canada i wish i coult meet congenial friends ^^

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TGIF!!

Today is friday !!

i'm so excited and I'm itching to go home now..

i'm working but honestly i have nothing to do.. i don't know why my boss hired me. i've been thinking that for 4-5 months haha

and tomorrow i will have my birthday party cuz next monday is my birthday!(Thank you guys)

i'm obsessed with foosball.. you know table soccer.. sounds stupid haha but i have an awesome foosball team

i don't think i could live without a foosball table.

i like this site cuz we don't know each other at all and i can write what i want to say
i don't use FB. i don't think it protects our privacy. when i go to the US and Canada i wish i could meet congenial friends ^^

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TGIF!!

Today is Friday!!

I'm so excited and itching to go home now..

I'm working but I have nothing to do. Honestly, I don't know why my boss hired me. I have been thinking that since 4-5months ago haha 

and tomorrow I will have my birthday party because next Monday is my birthday!(Thank you guys).

I'm obsessed with foosball..you know table soccer..sounds stupid haha but I have awesome foosball team.

I don't think i can live without foosball table.

I like this site because we don't know each other at all and I can write what I want to say.

I don't use FB, It doesn't protect our privacy I think.

When I go to US and Canada, I wish i could meet congenial friends ^^

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You're level of English is obviously very high, good job. A couple things to look out for are your articles. Also, although congenial is a great word, we don't really use it. I personally have never used it, apart from referencing the movie (Miss Congeniality). If you have any questions about my corrections, don't hesitate to ask. Good luck!

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