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Pilgrimage In late April, in my town is celebrated one of the oldest pilgrimage of Spain. The pilgrimages, which in honor of the Virgin, is celebrated two days in the center of the town and other three days in the sanctuary that is in the middle of a natural park, on top of a hill. During the days in the town, people dress with a costume. The streets are docorated and the atmosphere is cheerful. The costume of the women is very nice. It's the onñy traditional costume that is trending. In fact all years in the south of Spain there are several fashion shows with this costume. For me, are a great days, and I like dressing with my costume all years.

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Pilgrimage

In late April, in my town celebrates is celebrated one of the oldest pilgrimages (festivals) in of Spain.
The pilgrimages (festivals), which are in honor of the Blessed Virgin Mary, are is celebrated for two days in the center of the town, and another other three days in the sanctuary (What are you trying to say? I'm not sure this is the right word) that is in the middle of a natural park, on top of a hill.
During the days in the town, people dress in with a costume. The streets are decorated docorated and the atmosphere is cheerful.

The costumes of the women are is very nice. It's the only onñy traditional costume that is still current/ still in style trending. In fact, every year all years in the south of Spain there are several fashion shows using with this costume.

For me, these are a great days, and I like dressing with my costume every year all years.

 

I'm not sure what the right word for 'pilgrimage' or 'santuary' is- and for costume, you may also see 'traditional dress', or 'traditional costume'.

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