My pets

I have four dogs, whose names are Miky,Saimon,Andy and Bizcocho.
I like to spend with them because they make me feel happy and relaxed. 
I love them. 


Miky is a spoiled dog, whereas Saimon is jealous.

Muy bien :) 

     I have four dogs. They're named are Miky; Saimon; Andy, and Bizcocho. I like to spend to be with them because they make it so that I can feel happy and relaxed. I love them. Miky is a spoiled dog. Saimon is a jealous dog. 

Tu perro se parece a un oso koala!

My pets

I have four dogs, their names are Miky, Saimon, Andy and Bizcocho.
I like to spend time with them because they make me that I can feel happy and relaxed.
I love them.


Miky is a spoiled dog. Meanwhile, Saimon is a jealous.

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Good job! Very few corrections. I added "Meanwhile," to make the writing flow a bit better. Also, spoiled is the American way of spelling spoilt (the English way), both are right.