[ हाय! आप कैसे हैं?  ]

[ The ] importance of good health in our life.

Dear friends, the main purpose in writing this notebook entry is making my written English batter better by with your help.

I am not so good in English language as I am not a native speaker of this language, my native language is Hindi.  [ I think your English is VERY good! ]

As above you can see above, the subject of this notebook entry is "Health ".

I am here trying to put my opinion about how health is very important in our life.  [ there should be no space between the last word of a sentence and the period, Excalmation POit or QUestion Mark ]

I know you all must be aware regarding your health . 

As per my experience, we can do nothing without healthy body and mind .

If we want to get succeed in our life, then first we will have to be healthy .

Good health is the solid mile stone of our life .

For getting a good health [ or To get good health ], we must have a healthy schedule and the regularity in that schedule

This is the master key of getting a healthy life and success in our life.

Dear friends , I would welcome and appreciate your valuable corrections .

Thanks in Advance ,

Mohit

[ ਤੁਹਾਨੂੰ ਸੁਆਗਤ ਹੈ!  You didn't leave much to correct. Well done! शाबाश! ]

[ This is my first time trying Hindi and almost my first time using Indian script.   I believe this greeting is common in India: नमस्ते.  Where I live in Canada (near Vancouver, BC) I see a lot of Punjabi written in this script.  I should have learned to 'read'** this script before now { ** know what sound each letter makes } !

The Sikhs here use the greeting: ਸਤਿ ਸ੍ਰੀ ਅਕਾਲ.  I have a lot to do and do not have much time to learn the script, but someday … an hour later …

Oh my, It looks like Hindi and Punjabi do NOT use the same letters!

So, above, I think that ਤੁਹਾਨੂੰ ਸੁਆਗਤ ਹੈ! is Punjabi but आपका स्वागत है! is Hindi.  They look quite different !
But शाबाश! is Hindi - I hope!  Well, I've learned a lot! ]